Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people deal with various problems which have prominent impacts on human’s life. As far as I am concerned, it is better that governments assist individuals in order to address their difficulties. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reasons corroborating my idea is that solving some of the problems need huge money which families cannot afford lonely. Put differently, there are some trouble situations which are fundamental or specific subsequently, need tremendous money for addressing. For an example, some diseases such as cancer, genetic disability, and autoimmune diseases acquire a great deal of money in order to diagnosis or treatment. Hence, for solving such big problems authorities who have power in hand can allocate a particular budget and help people to deal with difficulties.
Lack of knowledge is another noticeable support which comes to my mind. To more clarify, governments have studied and have gained quite a few information in various fields such as policy, economy, society, commerce and so far. Hence, they are more knowledgeable persons compared with the public in order to address problems. For instance, one of the most important problems of every family is that their young get a decent and secure career. Put differently, Nowadays, there are a lot of unemployed persons who try their best to get a job. Although in the end, they may find a job, they cannot solve this problem substantially. However, authorities can put their knowledge into practice and with increasing the number of companies, supporting the entrepreneurs and creating new job positions provide more job opportunities for more number of youths.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that people can solve their problem by themselves. Mainly, individuals understand their problems better and can solve swiftly. In other words, if folk ask governments for assisting, it would take a great deal of time in order to evaluating the problem and finding the best way for solving. However, I still affirm that it is preferable people use the help of governments. Although solving people’ difficulties by themselves have some benefits, those advantages can be neglected compared with having authorities’ help. In addition, governments are well-experience persons who have dealt with numerous problems in various situations, it is not surprising that they can help people more effectively.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I think that people should ask governments help to solve their problems. Participating of money and knowledge are two prime and conspicuous benefit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2545.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63053097345 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11266360534 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546460176991 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5856068098 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.19047619 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23496206719 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741405413012 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838393736994 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144581510074 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518575047651 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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