Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than the positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is debatable that whether movies and television have more negative effects than the positive effects on young people's behaviors for this issue can be approach from different angles. However, after deeply deliberating, I contend that movies and television are conducive to the way young people behave.
Admittedly, movies and television may distract youths from their school works. Many children may forget their homework and study because of the TV shows and movies. However, it is just this distraction benefit youths to broaden their horizons. To be more specific, through those videos, they can learn more things which are important, meaningful, but the schools doesn't teach.
Moreover, movies and dramas increase the empathy of people, especially the youths. Everyone only can lead his/her own life, however, youths who comparatively lack of experience than the elder, can watch the world through the eyes of characters in dramas, then understand others life, situation and feeling. My friend, Joe, is a good example to illustrate this idea. He is a doctor without borders in Ethiopia and extreme movie-lover. Actually, it is the movies about starvation, virus and death which he watched when he was an intern in hospital prompted him to become doctor who work on the poor country. He wants to devote himself to someone struggle to survive just because they are born in unfortunate environments.
Lastly, youths have more creativity in that the movies and television shows flourish. These videos enable humans to experience not only others’ lives, but also places that we haven't been, which stimulate youths' imagination. For instance, my cousin is an eighteen-years-old girl who haven't gone abroad. Nevertheless, she wrote an app for people to exchange used goods and reduce consumption because of the inspiration by a UK documentary whose background is the climate change and animal extinction exacerbated by our consumption.
In sum, with the reasons I mention above, despite movies and television distract youths from school works, they broaden youths’ horizons, increase empathy, stimulate creativity, I believe that their positive effects are much more than the negative ones on young people's behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43804034582 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82243666179 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593659942363 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1660907118 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228066678449 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678512056428 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908579016227 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149349149503 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119642415323 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.