Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television shows made in foreign countries are usually more interesting and popular than those made in our home countries.
Watching movies and television shows can be two of the most enjoyed entertainment options. I believe that movies or television shows produced overseas can be more entertaining and popular than domestic ones.
First, foreign movies or television programs come with exotic charm. Typically, people watch movies or television programs to entertain themselves. And since they spent most of their years in their home country, programs produced locally are likely to come with plots or values they are already familiar with, meaning these stories will seem like boring clichés. For example, they might fall asleep while watching a domestic movie out of boredom, defeating the purpose of entertaining people in the first place. However, overseas producers are likely to have different ways of looking at the world, thus would create stories that are less predictable and sometimes might even have scenes that domestic audiences have never seen before. These novelties make such movies or television programs more appealing to domestic audiences because they are likely to be more attentive while watching and would have long-lasting memories afterward.
In addition to the enjoyment of watching television or movies, people sometimes will seek more practical benefits from doing so. With the widespread use of powerful passenger aircraft, international travel has become ever-more convenient, resulting in a dramatic increase in people traveling overseas. And when people have little knowledge of a foreign culture, they might not fully enjoy themselves during their short travels there, sometimes might even get into conflicts with the locals due to cultural misunderstandings. Therefore, many people would be willing to know something about the culture of a different country before visiting it. And one easy way to do so is by watching movies from that country. Doing so allows them to have a deeper understanding of the country’s unique features and would help them better plan their trips to make them more enjoyable.
To conclude, watching overseas movies and television offers people better enjoyment and helps people know different cultures better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put between 'will' and 'seek'.
Suggestion: will sometimes seek
...f watching television or movies, people sometimes will seek more practical benefits from doing so. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53172205438 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74315583495 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2148684319 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.066666667 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174259651152 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722341666089 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458155164764 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111751646985 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450662880794 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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