Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this age and days, the advent of different television technology has enabled a major paradigm on the people's daily life. In fact, they are so true that they have an undeniable role in people's behavior. In some condition, they have a negative impact. This is a more controversial debate. According to me, it is a no-brainer that movies and television have more positive effects on the way young people behave. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First and the foremost, some people are scared of scary things like the devil or will abstain to go in the dark. However, by watching horror movies, they can diminish their fear and can be brave and bold. A pertinent example can shed a light on this assertion. Three years ago, when I was in India, I was so sissy that I always avoid going in the dark. Therefore, I was facing a lot of dilemma in the dorm. In the dorm, my warden allocated me a single room to live, beginning days, I was persistently weeping in bed due to I was scared. Then one of my friends told me one day that If I really desired to eliminate my fear, I should commence watching horror movies. As soon as I begun to watch horror movies, in beginning days, My fear was escalated even more. Undoubtedly, after some time, I perceived that it merely in my head, there is no such thing prevailed like the devil in the world and I became fearless. Thatswhy, I think that movies have helped to become bold.
Second, movies can stimulate to do something immense or create an incentive in your life to desire to be something. Stress is the imperative chaos in an individual's life. Albeit, movies can help to remove stress from folks' life and make life cheerful and enjoyable. As I said above, that I was staying in the dorm due to study. After a long hectic day hard work, I used to get lethargic and colorless. In that circumstances, by watching movies, It makes my behavior cheerful and delightful. Inevitably, some jazz songs create vast energy in me to study more and urge me to do hard work. Thatswhy, I believe that movies can be helpful medium in many situations.
In a nutshell, I strongly believe that movies and television have a positive impact on young people behave. This is because it makes me fearless and helps me to cut off my stress which is a substantial for a wholesome life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, i feel, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48951048951 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60225900836 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1602641606 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0769230769 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11538461538 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180833279287 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526302523522 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853643910009 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141641529815 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101016060654 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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