Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

many people believe that movies and T.V have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. I agree with this statemente.

First, the movies and the T.V have huge influence about the young people. Most of the young people spend many time of the day for looking movies and T.V. Sometimes the young people really inside the movies, so they do not talk with friends, do not get play outside and they care only about their movies. For examples, my young brother, come from his school, turn on the T.V and begin look at movies. he will sit with the T.V until my mother tell him go to sleep, he do not care about homework, he do not talk with his friends. The only things he want is to sit and see movieshe" dir="RTL">.

Second, we do not have a control what the young people saw in the T.V and the movies. moreover, some of the movies talks about monsters or unreality things. moreover, the movies will showed the young people unacceptable things like porn, sex or other things. this will influence about the young people because they will fair from the monster or they will want to do some act from the movies. For example, if young people see someone do something wrong on women, he will think this is ok to do this. Another example, if someone in the movies jump from the roof, and keep alive, the young people should to try ithe" dir="RTL">.

By other hand, I can to understand people that will say that movies have positive effects, because the young people will get education from the movies. For examples, if someone love to investigate about the structure of the animals, they will look some movie about this on the T.V, so they get education.

For conclude, the T.V and the movies have many effects on the young people, negative and positive. we must to use the T.V and the movies in the positive side. All is on our control.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6814159292 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57462139953 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433628318584 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6793559903 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318937971002 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122248468654 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132489382611 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257478977938 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186091419757 0.0645574589148 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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