Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There is no shortage of debate whether the lifestyle in our modern society had developed in a more comfortable and enjoyable way than in the past. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say that nowadays the quality conditions of our existence had considerably improved and in the present, we have greater opportunities from a lot of perspectives. It is my belief that today we have all the necessary conditions to live in a developed and comfortable environment for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, today we have access to a lot of information which can be easily checked and validated. In this way we can always stay informed about different quotidian events which is very important because knowledge is a very powerful tool in order to thrive and achieve great results in life. Moreover, in the present day it is very easy to stay in touch with distant friends and members of the family, because of the development of mass media market in the recent years. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Fifteen years ago, I got enrolled at a university of applied sciences in Germany. Back then, my access to certain books and scientific articles was limited and I had to spend an enormous amount of money on my mechanical engineering books. Five years ago, I was accepted at a master program and since my first day I was surprised by the fact that I had the possibility to collect valuable information at a click of a button and from free resources. Had our society not been so developed, I would have not been able to have access to the online information and my student life would have been more difficult.
Secondly, nowadays modern technologies allow us to travel long distances much faster and in a very efficient and comfortable way. In fact, the concept of traveling had changed a lot since the invention of airplanes. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Fifty years ago, my grandmother won a scholarship at her dream university in Canada and she had to move far away from her home town. At Christmas she did not have the possibility to visit her parents because of lack of traveling money and as a result, she could not be close to her family during holidays. In addition, after a while she started to feel depressed and anxious and this made her drop college and move back to her country. It is certainly clear to see why being part of a developed society is critically important for the wellbeing of our community
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67543859649 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81234417851 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2379927212 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.444444444 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111927408012 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387507743177 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424496158838 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793540640305 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252729245892 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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