Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? New fathers should get a paid vacation from work when they have a baby?
First of all, father who has an opportunity to get a paid vacation, is able to spend more time with his families. This in turn will give to the father a chance to know his child, which undoubtedly can contribute to relationships inside the family. If the father takes a vacation, he is capable to help his wife with shores and looking after the baby. Although in most of the cultures it is women`s responsibility to take care of the newborn, very often women experience deep depression after birth, in this case fathers can help to deal with the negative emotions and protect psychological health of their families. To that end, having paid vacation by fathers can help them to build strong relationships with their loved ones.
Secondly, having a paid vacation can make the father a better worker. Productivity of an employee very often affected by his satisfaction in personal life. It is obvious, that when the employee has enough time to spend with his family, especially in such important moments as having a newborn, he will come every day to work in a good mood and perform his tasks much better than a worker who has difficult relationships inside of his family. Even giving paid vacation to fathers can seems too expensive for some companies, it actually can benefit them by having a worker who back to work from the vacation rested and full of new ideas. So, paying to father for vacation by companies can build positive attitude of the father toward the company and make him a great employee.
In conclusion, I feel that new fathers should get paid vacation from work when they have a newborn. This is because it is likely to help fathers to become better member of the family and advance in their career, which in turn can benefit all society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which in turn can benefit all society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71197411003 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61672049514 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4673583214 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27785720848 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128131489863 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133361357435 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224768046812 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686463911896 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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