Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
Newspapers and magazines bring people much useful information like about the in hand project, current events, cost of currency, and so on around their countries. Even though many people are the opinion that the best way to learn about a foreign country is reading through newspapers and magazines; but, I, personally, subscribe to this idea that such sources of information are weak to such a purpose. I think they carry some insufficient and even untrue news, information, explanation of events and so on about other countries sometimes.
In first place, learning about a foreign country in which there are very different cultures, human beings' behaviors and habits, political and social laws, to name but a few. Newspapers and magazines don’t have enough space to explain sufficiently about such knowledge and information. They work on the broad fields like advertisement, current events in their country, and so forth, so they cannot expound and elaborate upon foreign culture and something like that. Books and online information, in the contrast, are good sources to know about other countries. They focus on a specific matter to talk in each part, following elaboration on such specific matter. These days, there are many books and information on the internet which lead people to have good knowledge of other countries.
Secondly, there are many times in which the newspapers and magazines notify and give some false news and concepts from other countries. These happening is rooted in many factors like the lack of knowledge of their writers and editors, a personal purpose like get more money of some sponsors, on above all some political purpose. All magazines and newspapers must follow the current rule governing their country according to the politicians and rules' opinions. One of the most trusted ways to get familiar with other countries is directed way, I mean traveling to those country and understand their cultures, habits, history and everything we need by getting along with their people. Some other trusted ways to get such information are reading from books, online information and beyond others reading other people's experiments and memories through their handwritten on the internet.
In summary, by taking all of these into account, I think newspapers and magazines aren’t the best way to learn about other countries at all. They carry some inadequate and even untrue information about other country sometimes because different reason by the political purpose in the above all. Some better materials to know about other countries are books, others' memories and online information. I think traveling is the best way to familiarize themselves with the complexity of other society with different cultures and habits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, i mean, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32036613272 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72947739801 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455377574371 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5366774936 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211390595613 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766137934882 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578230838727 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147607236273 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309402088699 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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