Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things that are made in their own country, even if the price of these products is higher than that of the products made in other countries.
In each country, people have the most important role in identifying the way of business and thriving the economic aspects of their country. In many countries, especially the developing ones, there is a heated controversy among common people, politicians and businessmen that whether the people must buy home products, even the imported goods are cheaper. I, personally, subscribe to this idea that it is essential for everyone who is concerned about their prosperous and their country thriving to buy home products under every circumstance.
In first place, if dwellers in a country support the home trade by buying things made in their own country instead of imported goods, the job opportunity will be increased for all of them. It is crystal clear that a company will be success only if it finds its costumers, so accordingly they will be able to prompt their business to bigger one by absorbing more workforce. Another consequence of protecting the home trade and their products is establishing more enterprises all of which bring more and more chance for people to find their inspired job with proper income. For instance, roughly 20 years ago, Europeans used to purchase all of their demands from foreign countries. I mean they tend to imported goods more than home products; so after a while, not only didn't the numbers of their country's companies increase, but also the few existed companies, that produce required goods of people, bankrupted. It brought people job shortage problems that most of them had poor life's condition. In the contrast, 10 years later, they acknowledged the importance of supporting of such a company. They started to protect products that has been making in their own company which made them prosperous and rich after a short time because nearly all of them found a decent job with high salaries.
Secondly, as far as thriving of a country, in both political and economic aspects, is concerned, prerequisite is improving and increasing the trade home. It is not to mention that those country that import all of their demands, cannot rely on them and always are depended on to another country. They aren’t able to be an advance country because they are always in lower level of at least one country where they imported goods from. World powers always can use this weakness of such a country in their own favor. In the other hand, countries that its people support their own-made goods have an incomparable chance to get the power of business and following politically. Japan is a good example of such a country. They some years ago utilized their own people capacities to make everything in their country. They have produced clothes, foods, mechanical devices and name but a few. At the beginning, all of their people bought just their home goods even with more prices, but it didn’t take much time that they exported their goods to many foreign countries. It made their country one of the richest countries with a reliable power in the world.
In summary, by taking all of these into account, in my opinion, it is essential for individuals to support their home trade by buying things made in their own country. It helps both of them and their country to be rich and prosper. It will be ridiculous if people don’t care about their own country's economic and political condition and their own selves prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...me products; so after a while, not only didnt the numbers of their countrys companies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for instance, i mean, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2805.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96460176991 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64272385035 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469026548673 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5490596961 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5416666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247967587058 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807056682227 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587166284058 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176887740464 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186686705716 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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