Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Although helping others is good work, many of the individuals were not having such characters. Personally, I believe that there is an increasing trend of selfishness, and humanity within the people has reduced to nil. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there is a soaring population every day. It would be very difficult to reach with these large numbers of groups--many of them are poor, deformities and other many weaknesses. However, in the past, it would suit to help the small number of people. My friend is a compelling example of this. He works in an office that is ten-kilometer away from the home. In the meantime, he has to parks a car downside of the office. In the way to reach an office, there lived many people asking for money. Along with he didn't use to give any of them because if he gives to one of them, others use to have the same desire, he should have to give all. As a result, it compelled him to be selfish. Nevertheless, in the past, it would be easy for any person to distribute some sorts of food or clothes for others.
Moreover, people living in this century used to live a busy life. Every time they were involving in some sort of work. It would not enable them to be a magnanimous person. As a result, they become helpless, although they have some desire. In contrast, people of the past have sufficient time for deviating to such stuff. For instance, I am a computer engineer--and busy the whole week at my office work. I have only got free time during the time of my weekend during which I spend with my family at the outing. There is no such development of feelings in my mind in regard to help other. Have I got more free time, I might involve in the field of socialism and humanism.
Finally, more people of today were counterfeit, which eliminates the feeling of helping other people. Even if we have some desire, it might run away by this kind of thing. In contrast, the people of the past have some humane character. For example, my brother has a habit to give money to all of the hermits, when he used to visit the temple. One time, after returning from the temple, he meets the same person to whom he has given money--wearing hip hop and punk dress. He wonders why he has given money to him. After all, he has never donated even a single penny to anyone with that event.
To sum, I believe that people of the present do not desire to help others as compared to the people of the past. This is because in these days many of the people are helpless and difficult for doing with the individual so and because people were more bogus these days.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'park'.
Suggestion: park
...om the home. In the meantime, he has to parks a car downside of the office. In the wa...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... people asking for money. Along with he didnt use to give any of them because if he g...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e asking for money. Along with he didnt use to give any of them because if he gives...
^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ause if he gives to one of them, others use to have the same desire, he should have...
^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ed to live a busy life. Every time they were involving in some sort of work. It would not enab...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...my brother has a habit to give money to all of the hermits, when he used to visit the temp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, after all, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, kind of, sort of, as a result, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40122199593 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4435709074 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476578411405 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0898757782 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7096774194 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8387096774 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77419354839 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265420919715 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674558609529 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602696205536 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163900996536 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619333906003 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'park'.
Suggestion: park
...om the home. In the meantime, he has to parks a car downside of the office. In the wa...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... people asking for money. Along with he didnt use to give any of them because if he g...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e asking for money. Along with he didnt use to give any of them because if he gives...
^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ause if he gives to one of them, others use to have the same desire, he should have...
^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ed to live a busy life. Every time they were involving in some sort of work. It would not enab...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...my brother has a habit to give money to all of the hermits, when he used to visit the temp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, after all, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, kind of, sort of, as a result, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40122199593 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4435709074 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476578411405 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0898757782 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7096774194 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8387096774 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77419354839 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265420919715 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674558609529 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602696205536 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163900996536 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619333906003 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.