Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It's very easy to agree with this statement. While I do not think that it is the absolute best way, I do agree that it is one of the best ways to help children prepare for adult life. I agree simply because it's logical. Assuming the children will grow up to be adults with jobs, taking a part-time job would allow them to gain some experience before joining a full-time workforce. In my opinion, almost any experience can be a good experience, even if at the time it seems to be a negative experience.
When you experience doing something unfamiliar, it is almost always beneficial. When you aew going to do something with which you are unfamiliar, there may be a level of worry or preoccupation. You may not know what to expect. By parents encouraging children to have part-time jobs, they are suggesting a way to gain valuable experience that will help reduce the level of trepidation their children might feel when they are out looking for their first “real” job.
Of course, there's always the possibility that the teenager will have a bad experience with their part-time job, possibly creating even more worried and trepidation regarding full-time employment in the future. I grant that that is a possibility. Perhaps they encounter an overbearing boss, or colleagues that are difficult to get along with. However, as these situations also occur with “real” jobs in the “real” world, dealing with such things in a part-time job is good practice. Perhaps with the guidance of the parent who encouraged the teenager to get the job in the first place, the teenager would be able to work through these difficult issues. In this way, a bad experience might even be a better experience than a good experience!
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, while, of course, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80645621652 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528813559322 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3440632476 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352500424763 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106742746386 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928607521505 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241252383539 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718444076592 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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