Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should
never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons
and details to support your answer.
A person is defined by his inner capabilities not by his physical look. Being human many times we judge people by his appearance but I strongly believe that one should never judge by his look, cloths or any physical appearance. I have a several reasons for it I will explain it below.
To begin with, as I defined the beauty of a person by his thought, kindness and his strength. I would like to give an example of very famous person Mohan Das Karamchand Gandhi, he is known as the national father of India. He used to wear simple and cheap cotton cloths" dhoti" and if you got a chance to see his picture you will found him a very simple common man. However, He is one of a great person in Indian History. It was not that he does not understand the word but he was so concerned and careful for poor people that he left their fashionable clothes. So, here, I would l;like to convey this msg that before knowing the background story one should never judge anyone by his appearance.
Furthermore, I believe that physical appearance is just a myth. When I was started my college, I started living in a university hostel. Every evening we used to get a chance to interact with other girls and I always wanted to interact with girls who used to wear fashionable clothes. I was a fashion freak at that time. I made many fashionable friends and I was very happy. However, one day I wanted to go hospitals for emergency checkup none of my fashionable friends came to help me. Thanks to Sidra , a simple girl, whom I never talked, she went hospital for me. That day got so ashamed of my thoughts that physical appearance is apealing. Hence , I started believing that inner beauty is defined by a persons good karma not by one's appearance.
In conclusion, I will like to convey my msg very strongly that a person is known by his thoughts, kindness and his karma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51470588235 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60009266328 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3455823462 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7894736842 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110470863272 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342906185064 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345326152606 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655498333549 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254652122857 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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