You are going to start a new business. Which of the following do you feel is most important to be successful: a) lots of money b) lots of friends c) lots of products.
To start any business its very important to have critical thinking business ideas and of course motivation. All these factors play vital roles to make any business successful. I believe that If have trustworthy friends, I have all these factors.
No doubt, having money and products is advantageous but I think that If I need business ideas or inspiration I will need friends, whom I can talk to about startup. I know many successful businessmen, who had started a very small business at first. For example Mukesh Ambani, he is one of the most famous businessmen in India. He doesn't had a lot of money when he started his company but he is a successful businessman now because he has close ones who supported him in his decision. For me, my friends are close ones. Hence I would prefer to have friends beside me.
Friends play very important role in anyone's life either a businessman or a common man.In busines, there are ups and downs. If I ll have friends they can uplift me whenever I feel low or failed.
They will be my stress reliever. I remember one incident when I was in my high school about One of my neighbors, He doesn't have a friend but he was a rich man. He invested a lot of money in some share market and he lost all of his money. Which is possible for any businessman. Afterward, I heard that he suffered in many ways. He had to be hospitalized due to high level of stress. Now, imagine a situation if he would have had good friends then he could get out of his stress. So here I just want to convey that friends are more important than money in business or anything. Money, you can borrow and return it when you make a profit.
In conclusion, I would strongly say business is not a one man task. Money or product can not establish the whole business at all. You need people like friends to give moral support, strength and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47352941176 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57464849618 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0595496646 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1304347826 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7826086957 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174155232752 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502988773718 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427138874908 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912373898751 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368733953192 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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