Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A great deal of daily news is always allocated to declare the opinion of famous entertainers and athletes about different matter of life. Not only youths but also elders follow these news via televison, newpaper, and internet. The question is whether the opinion of celebrities are more important to younger than older people or not. As a matter of fact, youths are the ones who get easily influenced by celebrities since they are more sensitive to their envrionment, have less experience life and have more free time to follow celebrities.
As a threshold matter, the age has a pivotal role in youths' behaviour. They are more sensitive to their environment than elders. The younger people are easily influneced by celebrities since their hormones nature; they are attracted by famous entertainers while they watch a movie. Thus, youths follow celebrities and their opinion more than elders.
Furthermore, the juveniles strongly gaze at athletes or entertainers as if they were heros. Although celebrities are considered as prominent persons in the society, in fact they are not as excellent as the youths imagine. This approach found in younger people accounts for their low experience in life. However, elders have been meeting quite a few distinguished faces among which celebrities arenot the stellar ones.
Last but not least, younger generation have ample time to concentrate on the life style and opinion of their popular celebrity. Social media provides youths with broad information of every athletes and entertainers. Nonetheless, various responsibilites in life impede the elders to follow any news regarding celebrities; according to enormous challenges in daily life, the older people difficultly find chance to check celebrities' status.
In succinct, it is the younger generation who considers the opinion of celebrities very crucial. There are three main contributors to this matter that are illustrated in this article; A sensitive personality, lack of life experience and abondant free time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... Not only youths but also elders follow these news via televison, newpaper, and internet. ...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...people difficultly find chance to check celebrities status. In succinct, it is the younge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, thus, while, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41719745223 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96066172855 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5327556152 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.058823529 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279687602958 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992237503243 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083065228168 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161109582726 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720626324091 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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