TPO 28: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer:
Education plays a paramount role in recent years that affects all the aspects of life such as health, warefare, entertainments and so on. Its' highly prominent role has changed the believes toward education. As the education quality and results strongly influences children future nowadays, parents are more involved in their education than the past. Although some people believe that the education was as important as is today, in my opinion, nowadays more subjects are affected by education than the past. Parents are more engaged in their children education as their jobs, social position and future prosperity is impacted by their education.
First, as parents are very careful about their children, they imagine an excellent job position for them in future. To achieve this, they highly pay attention to the quality of the education they obtain. As in the past, all of the jobs were not related directly to the education, parents were not so obsessed with it. For example, nowadays, only few jobs are available for undergraduate people, however, some years ago people could have an appropriate job without any education.
Second, the society today is greatly impacted by science matters inn every fields. People should be well-studied to attain an ability to work in such society. As parents are who expecting their children in a high grade social level, they try their best to make them successful in their studies. Obviously, people with higher education who does enormous effort on scientific fields are always admired by the government and individuals.
Third, children would feel prosperous after a well education as they find themselves a fruitful component in society who has the potential to analyze, predict and act in the social issues. In addition, as being successful in educating process increases self confidence deeply, well-educated people would have a better sentimental life and are more strengthful to cross the obstacles in every matters of life. According to statistics, educated people rarely suffer from psychological disorders as their personality is well-formed.
In conclusion, parents are more involved in their children education than the past as it highly affects aspects of life such as job, social position and psychological status. Parents also should properly guide their students how to continue their way in such long rout of education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...s highly prominent role has changed the believes toward education. As the education qual...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...gine an excellent job position for them in future. To achieve this, they highly pay atten...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... education they obtain. As in the past, all of the jobs were not related directly to the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33510638298 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78970979862 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529255319149 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9437707978 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268127472543 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095742367723 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883191370437 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163907736376 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714343798129 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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