Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the strongest marketing materials is advertisement. Companies allocate great budget to advertisement as it is the tool to introduce products in the market. Unfortunately, most of the times there are exaggerations in the advertisements, they actually present the products much better than what they really are. These unreal shows are presented because companies want to sell more, win the competitions and be famous.
Firstly, companies try to attract more people by showing great effects of the product which directly increases their selling rate. In an introduction of a new product, the creativity of the advertisement is very much important as it can attract the attention of more people. For example, when a company first introduces its’ dishwasher liquid by an amazing exaggerated scenario, people decide to try it even for a time to evaluate the effectiveness of it's performance. Continuing the consumption of this new product then depends on it's quality.
Secondly, as there is a high competition between companies in selling some products, advertisements may impact seriously the popularity of a brand and the success in the competition. In some cases, the survival of companies depend on the advertisements they provide. For example, a beverage producing brand that had a medium sale in the market changed it's position by having advertisements done by a super star who drank the nectar and won the game. This company then became very successful between it's competitors.
Thirdly, the more creative the advertisement, the more famous the product. Sometimes advertisements had long term effects in the market by achieving fame. In this situation, people remember the advertisement for a long time and memorize the brand in their mind. For instance, long time ago, there was an advertisement for a vacuum cleaner which looked very powerful. When a women on the upper floor turned it on, it absorbed everything even the man sitting on the sofa in on the lower floor of the apartment. This creative advertisement made the vacuum cleaner brand very famous during the time.
In conclusion, there are unreal advertisements that offering products which aim is to sell more products, win the competition and be popular. If companies want to keep their consumers who are absorbed by advertisements, they should consider that quality plays an essential role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27248677249 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1681780218 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.110441284 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.65 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123776872874 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442900373375 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463605533262 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781318476036 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351202990167 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.