Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that celebrities opinions are usually important to both the young and the old. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree that the opinions of famous entertainers and athletes are more of importance to younger people than they are to older people for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First, Younger people are more susceptible to new opinions than older people. Certain values of people that are of age are usually entrenched, and as a result, changing is difficult. I have witnessed this personally in my life. I usually get thrilled by a famous actress in my country. She was loved by most of the people and a lot of the citizens especially the younger generation look up to her as their role model. Consciously or unconsciously, we find ourselves trying to emulate her in certain aspects, like the way she speaks and dresses. However, my mum who is also a big fan had never tried imitating her dress sense or even the way she speaks. This goes to show that younger people are more susceptible to new opinions and can be influenced by the ideas and opinions of famous people.
Secondly, Younger people tend to be more fascinated by celebrities than older people. Social media is usually the meeting place for celebrities and non-famous people and younger people make up a greater percentage of social media users than older people. This results in younger people being more predisposed to the life and opinions of famous people than older people. I have witnessed this personally in my own life. I and my siblings are cannot have a day pass by without getting actively involved in social media. This usually gets our parents upset because they cannot seem to phantom what interests us this much about social media. On the other hand, my parents can stay months without being on social media.
Finally, younger people are generally more ambitious than older people. Older people usually are retired (career-wise) and as such are not all out seeking ideas or opinions to better improve themselves. Whereas, the reverse is the case for young people as they are actively in the quest for ways to further improve their lives entirely and most young people tend to see celebrities as their role models. For example, I am an ambitious young woman and I tend to look up to some of these famous people as a result, I tend to take up some of their opinions and effect them in my career. In contrast, my parents are retired and are in no need of such opinions.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe without any modicum of equivocation that younger people are more susceptible to the opinions of celebrities than older ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76220806794 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62860273473 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426751592357 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0107230474 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5217391304 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330620315552 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113317497427 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107884564091 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224243195352 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05755462628 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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