Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.
Recently, financial issues have become one of the most important concerns in our everyday life. Money has been played an undeniable role in families and societies. In order to reach any of our goals, we need to know how to manage our financial aids even at a young age. There has been a debate among families which is necessary to teach children how to manage their financial issues or not. Although both ideas are respectful, In my opinion, children should learn how to manage their money from childhood. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs:
One of the most significant reasons is during childhood you can have mistakes and those mistakes won't affect your life and your mistake will be negligible. The amount of money which a child has is not much so the mistakes won't be huge. A child can once spend all the money for one month on the unnecessary thing but after a while, the child will learn how to spend it to have it for all one month.
Furthermore, a child who learns financial management will be more independent and responsible for the future. He knows the value of money and tries not to waste it.
On the other hand, financial management has a direct and indirect effect on the child. For instance, when a child gives a particular amount of money each month, he will have a plan to spend it and in the future, he will have plans in his own life.
Finally, if we consider the pros and cons of learning financial management at a young age, you understand it's inevitable to start as soon as possible. Any way parents play an important role during this process and they should advise and help their children during this.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57432432432 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49820059421 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7862146579 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266685681882 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093792730221 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628873397057 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146024360676 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828898531449 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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