Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
In this modern era, the internet become the most usuful tool in communication. I totally agree that internet has great advantages on our life. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examin in this essay.
First of all, Internet enhanced the communication between people. Since the communication is one of the necessary componante in life, Networks, contributes to it is development and enhancement. Also, internet facilitate the communication of far distances and international relationships. Evidentally, The connection between different populations nowdays become more easier with the help of social media. This is best demonstrated by my personal experience. Last month I went to the mall were I meet an Asian girl were we chat and I discovered that she is working at computer company like me. So, I took her number and her face book account. After that she went back to her country. Currently I text her when I need help at my work. Consequently, If internet is not available in this time, I could not be able to contact her again.
Second, Internet has great benefit to the companies and sells sectors. In particular, advertising is significantly affected by internet especiliy the social media. Hence, social media becomes one of the most important means to achaive higher sales. Thus, the profit is higher than using the traditional advertising ways. For instance, If a particular company wants to sale a specific product they will target their customers whom using internet for several reasons. First, it is easy to deliver the ads to the customer because usually they uses the internet all the time. Further, the prices of the ads are cheaper in comparson with the regular advertising methods. As a result, networks are one of the important tools to achaive high profit. If I have my own bussenss, I would use the social media for advertising and sale my products through it.
On other hands, some times internet has the disadvantage wasting time by playing games or interfer with other people lifes. However, the advantages of internet are outwight the disadvantages.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that internet has positive impact on our lifes todays. This is because it contributes in enhancing communication and because it help in bessinusess as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...en different populations nowdays become more easier with the help of social media. This is ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...perience. Last month I went to the mall were I meet an Asian girl were we chat and ...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence. Last month I went to the mall were I meet an Asian girl were we chat and I ...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k her number and her face book account. After that she went back to her country. Curr...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s sectors. In particular, advertising is significantly affected by internet espec...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ds to the customer because usually they uses the internet all the time. Further, the...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...ts through it. On other hands, some times internet has the disadvantage wasting t...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... enhancing communication and because it help in bessinusess as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09066666667 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9848208582 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2581348804 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4230769231 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4230769231 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88461538462 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159289850624 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446842600536 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470041744104 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949107402577 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025625201744 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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