Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Life without the internet is almost unimaginable, we would have to go to the library by ourselves to search for the information we need, and we would have to go to a DVD store rather than Netflix website if we want to watch series or movies. Evidently, the internet has become an inseparable part of our life, and it provides us with a more convenient and creative way to live. Without a doubt, the internet has improved our world and is going to continue making it better in the future.
The internet can help people find information more easily so that they can build up their knowledge and develop society more quickly. The internet let us use search engines to understand what humankind have achieved easier, which can let us make a further progress in human civilization. With the rapid advance of technology, the accumulation of knowledge has grown, which means scientists need faster and more powerful ways to search and transfer knowledge, plays an irreplaceable role here.
At the same time, the widespread use of the internet makes people’s lives more interesting and more convenient as well. People nowadays can use the internet to talk or even make video calls with each other almost at anytime and anywhere, which is an impossible thing if there is no internet. Moreover, there are a wide variety of things that can be done by the internet, including shopping online, paying bills, making a reservation, watching news, and even taking lessons.
There are countless changes that the internet has made on our life; however, those changes are not always positive. In fact, the anonymous internet environment may lead to internet bullies; also, internet addiction and internet fraud also could happen. Hence, the proper regulations are also necessary to decrease the negative impacts that the internet led to.
To summarize, the widespread use of the internet is definitely one of the best gifts to this world. Even if there are some problems causes by the internet that need to be coped with, the internet still makes life more colorful and beautiful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98270893372 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67586350485 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0857247285 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173454750694 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072521158786 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468959109368 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111662323917 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491964313748 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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