Today, the world is developing at such a fast pace, that if we look back in time, we will find out that nothing has stayed the same. One of these significant changes is the advent of the internet into our life. Personally I am of the opinion that in contemporary life, with the appearance of the internet, our lives have changed positively. I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs:
The first and foremost reason which should be mentioned is that today, we use the internet as a great source of information and knowledge. We can find updated knowledge about any field on the internet in a short time, while in the past it was really hard and time-consuming process to obtain updated and valid information because the main source of knowledge was printed materials, which takes a long time to be published and whenever they were accessible for the scholars and researchers, most sections of its information were not useable anymore. While, today scientist, researchers and writers use the internet to share their new materials and innovations with enthusiastic readers.
The second reason which should be noted is that today the internet significantly has facilitated our lives. For example, in workplaces, documents or official letters can be sent In a short time via email, or colleagues can communicate with each other and hold their meetings via different applications such as zoom or skype. Therefore, they can arrange and organize their tasks and take important decisions together from different locations easily, and consequently, they can save their time which is a critical factor in this busy and complicated world.
Finally, it is obvious that today, the internet plays an important role in the entertainment of people. People can spend their free time watching online movies or playing online games. For instance, Netflix which is a media service provider is a popular website among people, which can amuse people and help them to enjoy their free time.
To draw my conclusion, according to aforementioned reasons, I am of the opinion that internet has changed our lives significantly because we can find any updated information on it in a short time, and it helps us to manage and organize our tasks in our workplaces most effectively and easily, and the role of it on the amusing us is undeniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86555439992 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0852183521 48.9658058833 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.923076923 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3846153846 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149399982741 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647035256979 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515427406652 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841164222929 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045736364594 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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