Your friend has decided to switch careers, but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
It is hard to overstate the importance of choosing a job in everyone’s career. Some might select a job for its salary, and some might consider the future development of the company. If I had to give advice to my friend, I would urge him to find a promising job in which he could learn more. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, salary is not the most crucial consideration in job choosing at our age; instead, I would suggest that the future development of industries is much more pivotal. Since recent graduates like my friend are young enough to challenge the world, there is certainly time for us to discover a job that has good development prospects for the future. Some of my friends devoted themselves to machine learning when few, if any, knew about that. However, we can see that nowadays machine learning is one of the most popular technique in the world, indicating that being farsighted like my friends is indeed a proven way to success.
In addition, there is no doubt that building up knowledge and honing essential job-related skills are the necessary methods to gain more ability and chance in future careers. To predict future trends that might happen in this world is sometimes tremendously difficult; however, if we still are fully-prepared early on, we can seize every chance that may otherwise fly by without us noticing. A postdoc in my material science laboratory had spent a lot of time on personal development but had not found a suitable job until he was hired by a famous high-tech company asking for a competent scientist. This goes without saying that there are more and better chances for people who are completely ready like former postdoc in my laboratory.
To summarize, choosing a job with more future possibilities or finding a job where you can become more versatile with you own skills and even achieve a new ability, are my recommendations for my friends to choose a new job. These tips are truly imperative for us to reach an even higher summit in our career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, i feel, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78830083565 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746468925 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562674094708 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9886172785 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880193865006 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364204821577 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425190097533 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655213074123 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447350311765 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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