Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
On considering to the mature process of an individual from the earlier periods as childhood on forwarding to adulthood, education plays one of the most major factors significantly distributing on his/her development; on reference, it’s necessary to include both 3 main sources imposing educational effects in terms of: schooling, self-performing, and parenting. The last one mentioned above outstandingly impacts on children life since parents possibly their best teachers for such major reasons thanks to family role performance, and teaching-learning effectiveness.
Putting home-teaching beside schooling on comparison, parenting takes advantages from mutually family-relationships to perform their responsibility on teaching their children. Firstly, parents teach kids not only knowledge but also their attitude and behavior growing. Particularly, children’s developing process closely associate with witnessing and learning from what their parents act and behave, naturally constituting their kids’ mimic on treating to surround world. Secondly, the idea of family role forces the positive results on teaching and learning process thanks to sharing and sympathizing model. For instance, within family relationships, students feel more easily and softly to share with their parents either difficult or vulnerable issues rather than taking with teachers at school. Finally, home education considerably run on the fundamental blockage of loving that powerfully turn things become more easily. For instance, children learnt to pay for their parents’ loving and caring by trying to improve themselves to become better and better as they saw how their parents being proud of them equal to how happy they are.
On conclusion, the family model naturally gives the parents a change of teaching their children better than other educational areas.
Also, the effectiveness and efficiency of parental education practically weighted the bias on comparing with other traditional educating. This provokes arguments when some suppose that schooling offers much better supports for their children on growing in that specialized and professional academy environment. Actually, no one can negate the advantages of school system for students’ development, however, an appropriate way applied for home education possibly get the highly effectiveness that may show the surprising results. The idea of home teaching-learning on focus to the point of time flexibility and practical methods possibly makes this work efficiently over the traditional schooling. In particular, without any doubt, parents have the right way to share their time fund for teaching kids better than teachers as lessons can be everything about life instead of just number and words at class. Moreover, parents seem the one knowing and understanding exactly what their kids’ potential for forcing them to pinpoint and develop the areas fitting most with their individual ability, boosting their fulfill development. For instance, school activities fail to discover all of the hidden corners inside students’ potential to exploit their extraordinary and distinction. To the end, parental educating surprisingly contributes on growing children with much greater possible results for their normal development.
To conclude, parenting role on educating children should be taken highly priority on comparison with traditional school and class as what we consider here the great benefits from these kind of special parents-children relationships through its family role performance and also how effective and efficient this run on teaching-learning process.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1178, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nce, school activities fail to discover all of the hidden corners inside students’ potenti...
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Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e consider here the great benefits from these kind of special parents-children relationshi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3110.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94646271511 4.8611393121 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21929480513 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567877629063 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 931.5 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7132201262 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.684210526 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5263157895 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095638373315 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377832184259 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332616325891 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596712819212 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153354525584 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 10.9000537634 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 86.8835125448 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 10.002688172 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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