Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our learning starts from home where parents are our first teacher. They teach us many lessons such as speak, language, and decorum and also they motivate us for our coming days. In modern world by giving importance on children education is more than our earlier time- with this someone would agree but others probably not. In my opinion, giving priority on children education has many positive effects in our world because of the following two important reason.
The main reason is that nowadays parents are concerned about the value of education. Education is the prerequisite needs for every children as it is the boilerplate to become an influential person. Whatever areas in future you will choose is selected by your todays learning. For example, when I was reading in class eight in 2006, I knew an interesting facts of our village. On that time, a very few number of students was going to school because their parents gave more importance on their farming than learning. In the same village, after 10 years the whole picture were changed dramatically. Now, parents are more concerned about their children education by getting motivation from different medias such as, radio, television and social medias. They are now understanding the benefits of education. As you can see that, the widespread inclination towards education is because parents are now more cautious and aware the fruit of education than earlier period.
Another reason is that the competitive approach among families often augment towards education. The facts is quite understandable, when one family members doing good job and enjoying top tier class of a society, by seeing this the adjacent family indulges their children to practice that behavior. For instance, as I was grow in a village, the close neighbor often compete with us by their family standards. Our neighbor family has three school going children and our family has four members all are established. By reflecting us, our adjacent family reiterates their sons, daughters to study more and encourage them to become like our family members. This experience taught me that, if the competition is for education then it brings a widespread benefits all over the society, countries and world.
In sum, although it is possible to describe the adverse effects of learning but in long run it will bring only depression, sad and poverty. By promoting children to learn not only due to the awareness of their parents but also creates a milieu where competition has bring a widespread advantages. So, we should encourage our children to learn, make them discreet and rationale human being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'fact'?
Suggestion: fact
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ts of our village. On that time, a very few number of students was going to school because...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...dio, television and social medias. They are now understanding the benefits of education. As you can s...
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...en augment towards education. The facts is quite understandable, when one family m...
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Suggestion: grown
...e that behavior. For instance, as I was grow in a village, the close neighbor often ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...r education then it brings a widespread benefits all over the society, countries and wor...
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Suggestion: brought
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...here competition has bring a widespread advantages. So, we should encourage our children t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13053613054 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6750544564 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3963391673 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.045454545 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68181818182 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239197748776 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681686506783 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560319290431 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136878069827 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761769804995 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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