Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Undoubtedly, one of the most important and crucial factor for being successful is education, and parent have critical impact in their children's education. There is no doubt that education of children is very important for parents, but our modern life is not simple, and we all have limited time and resources. While a large number of people belive that nowaday parents are more involving in their children's education, others agree with the obvers idea. Nevertheleth, in my point of view, I believe that parent are not involve in their kids' education. i feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, our modern life is complicated, and parents have to work hard to provide living equipments for their family, thus they have limited time to spend on children's education. moreover, in the modern era mothers work outside of their home, which was rare in the past. Thus, mothers in the past had a lot of free time to help their children to improve their scores in the tests. my own experience is a compelling example of this. When i was at elementry school my mother always helped me and my brother in our homeworks, but my wife has not been able to involve in our kid's homeworks because she has two jobs. Consequently, nowadays parents are very busy, and they have littile free time to spend with their children.
Furthermore, today with technological equipments such as internet, computer, and cellphone students don't need any help from their parent, so parent spend less time for children's education. As we know, students can find every material they need in the internet especially material that are created for self-learning, and use these more effectively. To shed light on it, my brother is an elementry school student, and sometimes my parent want to help him in his homworkes, but he alwayes reject their help because he think learning from parent is old-fashioned. As a result, parent in modern life do not worry about their children's education.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents in the past were more involved in their children’s education than today. This is because parent have limited time, and because the technology can help students more efficient than parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96021220159 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70217970312 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511936339523 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0014155167 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316648956963 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124437634572 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974322275386 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231106359752 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760215182036 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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