do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a successful future.
It is established beyond any doubt that a job has a crucial role in our lives and has a direct influence on our future and our life. So it is extremely important to choose a proper job. Some people believe that choosing jobs in the past was easier than now because, in the past, people could identify appropriate jobs. While others think there are no differences between now and past. As far as I'm concerned, both groups have a true notion because of the following reasons.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that we live in a sophisticated world which changing constantly in implausible pace in comparison with the past so it's so routine to not able to anticipate what will happen. In contrast in the past, people not only could easily predict future events but also choose the proper job according to their knowledge about the future. My opinion on this fact has been profoundly influenced by my experience. When I graduated from university my father suggested me to work in a company as an employee because he was hired there many years ago and that time it was a brilliant opportunity for young people to work there. I trusted my father and went there but after a few months because of the improper economic situation of the country the company faced an enormous financial issue so the manager relinquished the company. Since that time I have not had any special job and that decision changed my future. Had did I anticipate the situation well, I would have had a permanent job. So these days it's not easy to identify which job is proper at all.
another remarkable reason is that although our world is changing continuously, Some works have a brilliant future and it's not depended on the era. Some jobs like engineering are the elementary needs of the society and people and society need them always. My compelling example demonstrates this fact better. My grandfather was a civil engineer and had a suitable job in a famous company with an impressive salary. As a result, he could make a calm life for her family. when my brother graduated from university as a civil engineer he was employed fast in a similar company as my grandfather and now he is so wealthy and has a prosperous life. actually, all civil engineers have a prosperous life like my brother because society always needs a civil engineer.
in conclusion, it's not true to think whether these days identifying proper jobs is easier or not because some jobs always have brilliant future but since we live in a changing world we cannot predict the future of jobs as well as past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66519823789 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64737642815 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477973568282 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1053855306 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164818877514 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505404410948 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475329723828 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114482065768 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408669531774 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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