do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is important knowing about happenings around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It is established beyond any doubt that contemporary human lives in a sophisticated world where is acquiring at a galloping rate. a controversial question that arises here is whether we know about all happening around the world or not. If I were to choose some news, I would definitely choose all of them. That is my firm opinion and I will explore it in the following essay.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that any insignificant event in the world can influence our life and our country. As a result, it's integral to notice all happenings which occur around the world. countries are now dramatically related to each other and their interior events may have a crucial consequence in another area of the world. Iran is a compelling example and demonstrates this fact well. Iran is one of the most important exporters of oil in the world so its economy is so depended on the oil. So If any happening occurs related to the oil in another country although it is so insignificant and doesn't relate to Iran's oil, it not only changes Iran's oil price but also has an enormous effect on our economy.
The second remarkable reason is that I'm a curious person in politic and knowing about the world's events make me satisfied. So I prefer to pursue all the news and happens. Actually becoming unaware of policy and world's events make me anxious and causes me to feel stress. As a human, I recognize that being aware of my world is one of my most foremost duties and I try my best to know about the world and strive to make a better world for all people. My notion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. Following the Iraq war, I was so depressed and I felt that I should go there to help people who suffer from the war. So I read the Iraq news daily and did some humanitarian activities to make myself satisfied because it was so periled to go there. While Hadn't I read that news, I would felt tension and stress.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we should aware of all events around the world because a considerable number of them have a significant effect on our life and it makes me satisfied to be aware of events in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...where is acquiring at a galloping rate. a controversial question that arises here...
^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Countries
...appenings which occur around the world. countries are now dramatically related to each ot...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...try although it is so insignificant and doesnt relate to Irans oil, it not only change...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... The second remarkable reason is that Im a curious person in politic and knowing...
^^
Line 5, column 788, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Hadn't
...se it was so periled to go there. While Hadnt I read that news, I would felt tension ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48872180451 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62687728938 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.998441803 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164327882758 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511999958895 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495938393872 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104217026031 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241562976105 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.