Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify which type of career or job lead you to a successful future.
career is one of the most important aspects of life and determines who we are and where we belong. personally, i believe that modern career options are too broad and complex to determine and secure one's life compared to those of the past. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explain in the following essay.
First of all, in the age of information everything is more connected than ever. because of the interconnection and interdependencies, one field is not enough to explore and cannot provide neccesities for modern people, and there are many variables and factors to affect one's career. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. my major is physics and as a scientist of one of the fundamental fields, i need to learn and research more about advanced studies of my field. Just having physics knowledge is not enough for me because it seems as science progress more it amalgamates all natural sciences such as physics, biology, chemistry and so on. When i read scientific paper, most paper of my field contain information of not only physics, but other natural science fields and also computer technology and so on. In my work, i need to calculate a physical process in computer and in order to that i need to know computer programing and writing codes. compared to us, modern physicists, previous eras of physicists usually calculated by hand and run test in labrotary with simple tools and it was much easier to master a given subject.
Secondly, people in the past had more simple and secure positions in their jobs. In the past, especially before 2000s the general phase of society was slower than that of today, and once people got their jobs or pursued one careers, they usually lasted long and more secure, but for today, competition for a certain job or career is fierce and requires constant growth. For instance, in my grandmother's era in my country, people usually did certain things for their whole career years without changing or learning new things. if for example you were a director of a company or driver of a truck, you would be this way until your retirement. but in modern times you need to be the best and learn to from your local community from whole world and what the people of your same generations doing. if you cannot adapt this fast chaning phase, there is no success for your career.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that compared to the past, modern career and jobs are more complex and difficult to succeed. this is because everything is more connected than ever and phase of today's society is more fast.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75391498881 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63487193909 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519015659955 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1527029377 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.842105263 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140753060655 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043774098302 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451834310445 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828112165755 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042794282734 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.