Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Making a right decision is one of the most important and challenging part of our life that sometime affect whole of it. It is said that youths make decision more independently than the past where their parents usually told them what to do. Personally I agree with this statement and in the following essay I try to provide my supportive reasons for that.
First of all, nowadays young generation are more educated than the past. Therefore, they acquire sufficent information and even adequate experience to recognize what is good for them and what is not. As a result, they do not see any reason to ask their parents when they make decision about their personal and professional life. In addition, in many countries, in the school it is taught to students to think and perform independent of their family as this is one of the most crucial ability for everyone to learn.
The second reason is that, nowadays there are lots of consulting centers and we can use the suggestions and the knowledge of experts working there. As far as I know, young people would rather get advice from consultants who are expert in this field and they do not know them in person. My own experience is a compelling example of this. About six years ago, when I wanted to make a decision about my major in university I went to one of this centers. After answering some questions, I understood that studying science is the best option for me. If I had got advice from my parents I would probably pursuing my study in engineering, which is kind of tradition in my family. Indeed, I am happy now that I did not make my decision based on my family advices.
In conclusion, I hold the opinion that nowadays young generation less and less prefer to consult with their parents about the decisions they would like to make.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'pursue'
Suggestion: pursue
...advice from my parents I would probably pursuing my study in engineering, which is kind ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77115987461 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87189426218 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0307987628 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327746189661 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114409853419 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753942579623 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214383101732 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433995477728 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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