Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern life, there are lots of routine tasks that we are obliged to do which are not pleasant for us. Personally I think that the overwhelming majority of people prefer to do various tasks when they are at works. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I try to explain in the following essay.
Firstly, doing the same task over and over is kind of boring. Under this circumstance, one does not need to think and use his imagination, rather he just does the tasks based on his habits. As a result, after some time doing a specific duty, one would lose his creativity. What has been mentioned is not a pleasant situation for most of the individuals. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a freshman, I used to work as a saleswoman at a chain store. Therefore, I did not do much work all day long. Actually, I could not cope with this work and just after one month I resigned. Now I am sure that If I had not resigned, I would not have live happily.
The second reason is that by doing different types of works one can heightened his abilities and raise his chance for higher job positions. To be more specific, there are more positions for a person who has been responsible for different types of works, if he wish to change his work. For example, if a person has done various tasks in an office he has acquired many experiences and consequently he could even apply for the other careers in another office. The importance of this is clear when one has to change his works due to the personal problems.
To conclude, I hold the opinion that people would rather do various tasks in their works. Since in this case one has good feeling about himself and can add to his abilities and learn new skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wishes'.
Suggestion: wishes
...ble for different types of works, if he wish to change his work. For example, if a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42724458204 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49868026779 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5995152581 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22834110218 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726523400795 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604607175538 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134986293956 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434161339653 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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