Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In some societies telling the truth all the time is an important part of the culture and if one person does not follow this way he will not be recognized as a decent person. Personally, I believe that being truthful in all situations is both vital and moral and has an enormous impact on the communication with others. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, honesty is key factor for all relationships, including personal and working relations. In other words, if the two individuals could not trust each other, they would not be able to cooperate. Therefore, honesty is crucial for beginning and also for preceding in all relations. For instance, if partners do not tell everything to each other from beginning of their acquaintance, they will probably face some problems and future conflicts.
Secondly, knowing the truth leads to better mutual understanding which in turn make people help each other in difficult situations. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a freshman I did not participate to some of my math classes since the subjects was extremely easy for me and I get bored. As a result my teacher was a little mad at me. At that time, I decided to tell my teacher the truth and surprisingly he did not take it personally. Instead, he suggested me to study more complex math material and even gave me some of his books. If I had not tell the truth, I would not obtain this opportunity to have excellent books.
To conclude, I hold the opinion that honestly and telling the truth is so important for having a healthy and proper relationship with others. This is because being honest lead to the trust and mutual understanding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...gave me some of his books. If I had not tell the truth, I would not obtain this oppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98322147651 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40515907535 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7137858356 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969937142615 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378468686919 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420906630772 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685621773695 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334943019809 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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