Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The young people freestanding and their freedom in the decision-making process is one of the most controversial topics between social scientists and even common people. Annually many books and articles are published to deal with it, which is a sign of the subject's importance. Some people are of the opinion that in the past decision making for young people was easier in comparison to these days, while I believe that today's youth are more independent, I feel this way for three reasons which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, in the past most of the people were farmers and they have lived in large houses. Usually, young persons assisted their father in the farm's work which indicates they were entirely depending on the home's maters; moreover, they were confined to follow their fathers’ careers. For example, my grandfather when aimed to find another job his father opposed with him and did not allow him to follow his way, my grandfather usually mention it as one of the worst memories in his life; however, nowadays boys and girls use their parents as an advisor; however, the final decision is made by themselves.
The second reason, in the past the only experienced and knowledgeable people were parents and elders; as a result, young people were capable to get some information by visiting them. But these days information is ubiquitous; additionally, you are able to obtain a large amount of information just in a minute; moreover, sometimes I help my father in his decision-making process because he believes my information is vast and fresh which on the whole view it gives rise to a better result. Some days ago, I read an article from a major journal that stated the amount of information we are perceiving in each day is more than the total information that in the past people had received across 20 years.
These days there is a wide variety of jobs; the number of jobs is more than ever. As an example I found my first job at 18 easily, therefore I do not depend on my father's money and fund. I have the power to choose my interests and do a wide variety of hobbies without any parent intervention.
To wrap up, I support the idea that is stated today's young people are more convenient and independent in their choices, because they can easily find a career, they can get a bunch of information in their hand-held devices and there is nor limitation to do a special work like their fathers.
The reading and the lecture both argue about bees' existence in 200 million years ago. The author of the lecture based on piece of evidence feels there are three reasons to disapprove of bees' presentation at that time, on another side, the lecturer challenged reasons made by the author, she is of the opinion that none of the author's reasons are valid; probably bees could have been on the earth at that time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subjects'' or 'subject's'?
Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
...to deal with it, which is a sign of the subjects importance. Some people are of the opin...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...son to these days, while I believe that todays youth are more independent, I feel this...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... in the farms work which indicates they were entirely depending on the homes maters; moreover, they wer...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...information by visiting them. But these days information is ubiquitous; additionally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77245508982 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6537644896 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1243061438 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.4 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.6045352989 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323505927214 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952934817087 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759825437445 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148018772335 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889397606485 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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