Learning attitude always helps an individual to get information or knowledge about the particular subject matter. People does not always necessary to gain knowledge from reading the bulky books and spending whole night about the subject matter. They can gain knowledge through the help of their own friends who already have knowledge about this subject matter. I believe that any individual can learn any subject matter with the help of their colleagues. I feel this way because of two reason which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Student always do not understand the whole chapter through out the one lecture. Sometime, they did not get full attention or the topic itself is very hard and beyond their capacity. But, there are always the brilliant friends who already know about it and easily teach the other friends too. I have my own experience about learning easily with the help of my friends. When I was in University, I always feel very hard about the geology subject. I try to learn through my self by reading the note book, class tutorial but I was not able to grasp the concept of geological structures their contributions towards the earthquake. At the same time, my first semester exam was coming nearer. I was in tension and cannot able to figure out how to pass in my first semester. And, I decided to ask the help with my best friend, who is very good in geology. She started teaching me just one hour a day. I feel very comfortable to ask even a very easy question. I even did not think about what is think about me and my knowledge regarding the subject matter. She effortlessly taught me about my confusion. Moreover, we started talking about the content while doing chat at home. Because of her immense help I easily score good marks in my knowledge. From those experience, I did the same approach in my whole academic year and I score good grades.
Secondly, Learning always beneficial with the help of same age group people rather than higher level . We always feel hesitant to ask our query to the professors or our supervisors. We feel that how to ask about those silly question to them. For instance, I experienced another difficulties when I was in a Project. My project work was based on using the geographic application and making the map of working village. I was very poor in using the ArcGIS software. But I was not that much of dare to confess my weakness to my project head and learn some techniques with him. I decided to ask with my office friend to help me using the software. With the help of him, I easily learn to run the software with in a week. If I was asked to help with my senior, I am sure that I will never able to learn because of fear and awkwardness. From that experienced, I learnt that, It will be always beneficial if we ask the help from our friend to learn about our problems rather than seniors.
In the conclusion, People always feel good while learning their weak subject matter from their friends. They do not feel any awkwardness and able to learn all difficulties. This is because, they do not have any fair with them and able to share easily about their problem. SO, I strongly suggest my every juniors try to learn your difficulties with your class mate. It will be more effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Suggestion: thought
...ion. I even did not think about what is think about me and my knowledge regarding the...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t the content while doing chat at home. Because of her immense help I easily score good...
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion:
...se silly question to them. For instance, I experienced another difficulties when ...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to use' or 'use'.
Suggestion: to use; use
...to ask with my office friend to help me using the software. With the help of him, I e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 584.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60445205479 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51724478239 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436643835616 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 31.0 9.59856630824 323% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5733973204 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6756756757 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7837837838 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10810810811 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152059546011 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414120361076 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383528089983 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103846244703 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282277945479 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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