Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
Books have been perfect teachers and mentors to all people around our big planet. Some people believe that one should read only those books that are based on a true story. I partly agree to this theory due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
On the one hand, books that do not have any facts under them inspire an idea of wonder to people. Many people instead of working hard to achieve their goals, do nothing and wait for miracle to happen. Moreover, some of them inspire their children and grandchildren to share their thoughts. For example, I had a classmate who has four siblings, when I asked why do they have so many children, he answered that maybe a marvel will happen and someone will become rich. Thus, plenty of people believe in a prodigy to appear instead of trying their best to achieve their goals.
On the other hand, unreal stories still have positive life lessons that teach children. Many fairy tales made as an example of a moral lesson that a parent want to teach their child. In addition to that, fairy tales give simple example about what is good, bad, and other good lesson for children. For example, the moral of Russian fairy tale “Gingerbread man” is that one should not fully trust strangers especially if they say good things about them. Therefore, even invented stories can become a good teacher for children that teaches simple life lessons.
To sum up, one cannot fully argue that kids should only read document-based literature because it inspire an idea that the only thing that will change one’s life is wonder. In the same time they teach common moral lessons to kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inspires'?
Suggestion: inspires
...ad document-based literature because it inspire an idea that the only thing that will c...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26388933248 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2556402493 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134749598193 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498426198434 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579028493044 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977443591866 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749795154638 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.