Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend the money

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend the money.

With the skyrocketing development of economy, people nowadays are endowed with better conditions to enjoy their life, and raising pets are gaining more and more popularity among the public. However, some critics contend that people are spending too much on their pets, and there can be some other good approaches to spend their money. Personally speaking, I disagree with this statement, since raising pets helps to improve health and socialize more.

To begin with, keeping pets contributs to one's mental status and physical fitness. Currently speaking, with the acceleration of urbanization, people are more apt to live in big cities rather than small ones. This brings about fast-paced life styles, so we are tremendously busier than past days. With tons of stuff to cope with at work, it is more reasonable to pursue something relaxing and soothing in the spare time. Pets can just provide such opportunities. Take dogs as examples. They can keep us company when we are back from work, thereby greatly alleviating the stress and rendering their wordless consolidation. Also, it is the owners' responsibilities to take dogs out for walks, which contributes to their physical health. In this way, they can have a healthier leisure time, instead of just staying at home to surf the Internet. Hence, we can see that keeping a pet really deserve that much attention, and it will pay off for the owner to spend money on their pets, owing to the fact that their pets can give them emotional support and contribute to their good physical condition.

Furthermore, pets endue their owners more opportunities to socialize. To be honest, it is very common for people nowadays to use cellphones and computers, hence inducing more chances for people with the same kind of pets to communicate with one another. Also, they are willing to share their happiness of keeping pets with those who do not. It is estimated that pets-relating contents are taking a pivotal role on social and streaming media, such as YouTube and Instagram. Therefore, keeping pets can facilitate to enlarge their owners' social circles and develop better interpersonal skills. As a result, these can all make the owners feel satisfied about what they have spent on their pets. Namely, spending money on their pets give them more valuable things that money cannot buy directly, and this further contributes to their emotional bonds with their pets.

As a matter of fact, spending overwhelmingly much money on pets can have detrimental consequences. Some pet owners are far beyond what is proper for their own financial capabilities. For example, some people might just want to give the best to their pets but did not manage their finance well. They were way too lavish on their pets that one day they got economically straitened and just gave their pets away, or even worse, left their pets to stray on the streets. This is extremely undesirable for both the pet keepers and all the others in society, since the stray animals can pose a threat to human beings.

Judging from what have mentioned above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that spending money on pets do help to improve mental and physical health as well as to socialize and build more relationships. Meanwhile, we should also be alert not to spend money beyond what we can afford. In this sense, we can truly obtain the well-being in life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2815.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65103203808 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509734513274 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0604736335 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.535714286 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1785714286 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32142857143 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399760728006 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110635761788 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915924755238 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261578163036 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599343360543 0.0645574589148 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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