In recent years, people spend a lot of time working, as soon as they can and it is imperative that they take some much deserved time out for themselves which leads me to disagree with the topic. My two reasons for the same are explained below.
Firstly, a large number of individuals spend the majority of their day working, where some of them are not paid proportionately for the amount of work they do. If they continue working for even longer hours while stressing themselves out in the process, it will lead to monotony in their lives and they will more likely end up burnt out by the end of the month. The typical 9 to 5 worker often ends up extending their work hours to meet deadlines but ends up hating what they do and living an unsatisfactory life. On the other hand, if someone takes some time out for the activities that they like to do, perhaps painting or gardening, they will feel rejuvenated. This will in turn motivate and push them to work smarter and more efficiently than before. My father, for example, usually takes out his Sundays to garden and focus on himself, to take some stress out that he has built up over the week interacting with various patients every day in a post-pandemic world. If he stopped doing so, he
would not have as much zeal as well as precision in his work.
Secondly, taking time out for personal enjoyment and spending that time on leisure activities is often very beneficial. People learn new skills that are definitely transferrable to their daily routine which will help them advance in their professional life while also receiving personal gains. For example, I have been a fond reader since school days and continue to read at least for 30 mins before bed. This habit of mine is surely helping me in my classes at university where I have to read and process large amounts of information, and at a higher than average reading speed too, in order to accurately answer questions and get good grades. This form of personal enjoyment gives me a break from my hectic schedule while allowing me to have a competitive edge over my peers.
To sum it up, I think people who spend time on themselves, are absolutely right in doing so. In a world where self-care is encouraged, more people should do things they like in addition to doing things they should. This not only allows you to reconnect with yourself on a more spiritual level but also allows you to pick up a few helpful skills along the way that will help you grow as an individual, both professionally and personally.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e same are explained below. Firstly, a large number of individuals spend the majority of their...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...ic world. If he stopped doing so, he would not have as much zeal as well as precis...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61862527716 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57724647623 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538802660754 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3885536509 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.529411765 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172225297632 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622240826277 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594528236622 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106397535146 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527723763607 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e same are explained below. Firstly, a large number of individuals spend the majority of their...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...ic world. If he stopped doing so, he would not have as much zeal as well as precis...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61862527716 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57724647623 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538802660754 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3885536509 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.529411765 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172225297632 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622240826277 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594528236622 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106397535146 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527723763607 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.