Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which automobiles play in the modern era. Using automobiles in our daily affairs has been assumed primacy. Some people believe that nowadays, people are too dependent on automobiles, whereas others hold exactly the opposite view; nevertheless, I contend with the latter group’s opinion. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons substantiating my point of view.
To begin with, we should consider the fact that we would not have this developed world if we had not become dependent on automobiles. After the invention of automobiles, people could communicate with each other, and they start creating such a complex community. There is no way that we could turn back to the days before the invention of automobiles; therefore, people should not think of the elimination of automobiles. Imagine a world without any automobiles; how ridicules it could be! It is a compelling conclusion of the fact that having had automobiles is superior to cutting it out of our community.
Furthermore, as technology have been developed people can work in long distance. Although it is essential for people to convey with automobiles, they have reduced the dependency on it. my personal experience is a compelling example of it. Before I had started working in the company which I am working, for now, I worked in a small company, and I should drive 20 kilometers every morning to reach the company. I could consider myself a person who totally dependent on automobiles. Once I started working in the current company, I feel relieved. I am sure that it will be more developed in the future and people are going to be more independent.
Considering all the reasons mentioned above, one could conclude that people are not too much dependent on the automobiles since they have needed it in order to build such developed world and the will be, and also they trying to become less dependent by working in long-distance and not going to work by their automobiles every single day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96501457726 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97552397289 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513119533528 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9645515827 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233977955762 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752916504097 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592730625259 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143527185547 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182729588749 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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