Science and technology have greatly improved people living quality today. Though people's life is much more wonderful than the that in the old days, thanks to the availability of more entertainment activities, it is also accompanied with more pressure. Consequently, people indeed spend less time on personal enjoyment but more time doing things they should do.
College students are having so much homework pressure nowadays that they almost have no time taking part in entertainment activities. For example, I only hang out with my friends around once per month. Usually, I spent my weekends doing homework and research projects. Even my least hard-working roommate spent his weekdays only on studying. Another example is the craze for studying abroad. The seats for taking a TOEFL exam are always filled because they will be all registered in one second after they are released. Since the TOEFL exam is not an easy test, students must work hard in order to pass the test. Based on these two observations, students today spend much time studying instead of enjoying.
In addition to college students, people who have been working are more so. To afford their children's education as well as their housing, working as hard as possible is necessary. News like employees died due to working continuously for dozens of hours without sleeping is not rare. So is the news that many children in a village can only see their parents once per year because their parents have to work and live in other provinces. These facts indicate that many people with a job are usually having no time enjoying.
Why would someone have the thought that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment? The reason is precisely that people are having less time on enjoyment. More time has been spent on working, which results in more desire to engage in entertainments. People are thus paying more attention to those who are playing while they are working. Gradually, people just forget others who work hard and falsely assume that most people are playing in most of their time. Consequently, the opinion is put forward and get approved by a lot of hard-working people, which helps the spread of it in return.
In sum, this opinion is not true. The truth is quite the opposite: people nowadays spend too much time working. We really need to have a rest.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, really, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94430379747 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54296961051 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8650498302 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.12 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232515586796 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065265384072 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100761205234 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136999003574 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949369825818 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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