In regarding our lifespan, acknowledged research shows that our general lifetime is averaged as 90 by the development of common living facilities, medical treatments and so on. Considering this term is short or not depending on the perspective of life. Besides, in this limited time span, personal time is meant to be your own time, hence it's free to do whatever you want, for instance, one can specialize in engineering skill for one's joy much more than anything else. In my opinion in this question, I am not on neither side of yes-man nor no-man because people around me and peers seem compatible with their own rectitude and self-demand, moreover, not only among those I've seen or known but also I've been feeling the wat in the social community. What reasons and factors are listed as a following.
No without saying that, most children spend the time to play at the ground, devote themselves to own interest such as making a Slime/ It's totally natural and benefit to them to shape their future's choice later. After several years, we grow up considerably, then sponteneouslly demanding tasks and mora rules come up to us little by little but certainly. That's the situation for me right now. However, I sometimes face difficulties to get used to those popup-demands, my some fellows are excel at adapting to new circumstances and also capable of effective time management. Accordingly, They complete what they should do at the time firstly, then extra time they use for self-enjoyment, that is to say, they are unlikely to fall the credit of class or get acceptable exam result.
In social life, a lot of people devote most of their life to work even though it is getting a great countywide problem: A number of businessmen are dead due to overworking. The news is featured in that many employees are repeatedly working until the day changed for own household and basic living wage etc. In this case, in my country, most workers are prone to draining all their time to working in which rather accelerating their lifespan.
In a nutshell, those at young age are likely able to compatible with both social demands and personal one, notwithstanding the older's life is likely all about a work without their personal fun and time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...life. Beside, in this limited time span, personal time is meant to to be your own...
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...ited time span, personal time is meant to to be your own time, hence its free to do ...
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...to own interest such as making a slyme/ Its totally natural and benefit to them to ...
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...p to us little by little but certainly. Thats the situatin for me right now. However,...
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...hose popup-demends, my some fellows are excel at adapting to new cercumstances and al...
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...life, a lot of people devote most thier life time to work even though it is getting great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for instance, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78865979381 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6863732292 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636597938144 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2940925933 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174345020598 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484999190532 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689498092969 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931877586597 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419818130392 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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