As far as I concern, people have been debating about the pros and cons of the making decision alone. Decision making process itself is very complicated and it involves broad aspect. It directly connected to some body's future. Some people like me always like to take experienced and intelligent people's idea to make future decision, while some people strictly consider their own opinions. From my personal view point, I strongly agree that we should consider people's opinions to take any serious decision. My two rationales are as follows.
To begin with, you can use someone else experience to make right decisions about your future. you do not have to go through the process and make the mistakes from which you can learn something. Anyone can have conversation with the experienced people and can get correct feedback which can lead you for the right guidance. I will take my personal example to illustrate this, when I was applying for the universities and was not sure how to start the procedure. My uncle is the professor in the college, one day I had conversation with him about the application process and he guided me to fill out the forms and got me through the right program in the reputed university. That prevented me to choose the uninterested subjects.
The another reason is that intelligent people can share brilliant ideas that you are not aware about. Sometimes, some honest people can give you the right feedback which anyone may not like the first, but it may come out as a life saving advice. For example, when i worked in the computer programming institute for the NYC. Many times, nobody liked the team manager who always tell the right things to the team members whether people like it or not. One time, she found few mistakes in my projects, i did not like it at the beginning. I then realized that feedback helped me not to repeat the same mistakes in the next project.
However, some people do not like anyone else opinion in their personal life. it completely depends on the people's thinking. According to the survey released by the federal research center, more than two thirds of people agree to involve someone's opinion to make the future decision.
All in all, I strongly consider that new ideas and thoughts help people to prevent making mistakes as well making right decisions. In general, I wholeheartedly believe that the very first thing we should do now is to admit the importance of future decision to open the door of our bleak future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, third, well, while, for example, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81308411215 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54238246943 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.045849737 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5652173913 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166041515288 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486475137501 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522545397814 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944509005005 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400600627537 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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