Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the proposed statement. Nowadays, living is changed very much than in the past. Technology is developed for many things, and many things work by using the Internet. Therefore, if people needed the government to build roads in the past, they need newly developed services now. Developing technology has improved by using the Internet. The Imagination of living without the Internet is impossible today. I think that providing Internet access is just as important as other services, so governments should offer Internet access to all of the citizens also, improve it at no cost. I have mentioned some of the most important use of the Internet and some of my experiences below.
Communication with faraway places has become much easy by using the Internet. This performance of the Internet is a big benefit in many cases. For example, I am a student, and I had to travel and live in another country that is very far from my home country. I can not go to see my parents, my family, and my close friend easily because the distance is very long and I am busy with my works at my university. The Internet has helped me to see my parents and others by using some programs such as Skype. By using the Internet I can see my mom and dad, and I can talk to them.
For another example, By using the Internet I can contact other universities and discuss with the professors of other universities, we can share our knowledge and work on the same project. If we do a big and useful project together we can improve many technologies today.
Finally, many companies, departments, and centers are using the Internet to transport information, so they do not need to transport them by someone.
To sum up, I think the Internet is necessary today, and the government should try to offer Internet access to all of the citizens at no cost.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 542, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rnments should offer Internet access to all of the citizens also, improve it at no cost. I...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... should try to offer Internet access to all of the citizens at no cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74946302831 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487654320988 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2402373848 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376160702293 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124913343861 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127429179387 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222688445666 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139825859096 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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