Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
I would definitely think that providing internet access is just important as other services and should offer to all citizens at no cost. It is my firm belief that with the improvement of technology, the internet plays a critical role in our social life for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that the internet is so necessary for our life to be comfortable and easy.
My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, I live in the city near the capital city of my country and we don't have enough access to internet service. So, in the last year when I want to registered for my university class, I can't connected to the internet and I lost my class on that semester. It was not a good event for me and for the whole period I was struggling with it's consequent. So as you can see the internet services is so important like building and roads. If there is no road in the city people have a problem with their daily transport, if there is no internet access, people can't manage their daily works.
Secondly, today not only students and scholars work with the internet but also everybody in different age and class level need and use of the internet. Drawing from my own expertise, my grandfather had a problem for opening his market during the Covid pandemic, so we decided to run his market online and he use the internet for his career. Now my grandfather runs his market perfectly and most of his trade is with online shopping. As a result, internet is not just for academic people and everybody is its user.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that providing internet access is so necessary and governments should make a plan for widespread network access.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r the capital city of my country and we dont have enough access to internet service....
^^^^
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o registered for my university class, I cant connected to the internet and I lost my...
^^^^
Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... if there is no internet access, people cant manage their daily works. Secondly, ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 309, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...decided to run his market online and he use the internet for his career. Now my gra...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61801242236 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62968669468 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7944335149 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344728928127 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132830912404 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135304300163 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203343320586 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100580570047 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r the capital city of my country and we dont have enough access to internet service....
^^^^
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o registered for my university class, I cant connected to the internet and I lost my...
^^^^
Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... if there is no internet access, people cant manage their daily works. Secondly, ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 309, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...decided to run his market online and he use the internet for his career. Now my gra...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61801242236 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62968669468 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7944335149 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344728928127 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132830912404 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135304300163 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203343320586 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100580570047 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.