Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Reading book is a very enjoyable work to do and watching movie is also a fun thing to do. We spend most our watching movies, and reading books so we should know which one worth more. If you ask me reading book is the more enjoyable than watching movie and I have some reason for that.
First, you can see many more detail in the novel than in the movie. The author can write more and he or she has no limiatation in the number of pages he or she can write but a movie director should stick to the clock and he have to make the movie in a certin time.For instance, I read this book The Hunger Game written by a female writer. She provides many details, explaining the fight scene and how the main charachter act in critical moments. you get to know the main charachter very well that you think you, yourself have been in such situation and suffered through these dangerous problem. After that I watched the movie and I wanted to compare it to the book. To be honest, it wasn't the book at all. The director had changed many points of the main story and it made feel like very disappointed about it. There for, books can provide with more detaile, and you enjoy more.
Second, You can make the scenes of the plots in your mind and you make your own image of the story you are reading from the book. Designing the scenes in your mind can improve your imagination and help you to be more creative. For example, I read a a book about wild life, a story of dog survivng in a very hard sitatuation, called The call of wild. after few days our art teacher asked his students to draw a picture of a dog in a snowy envirement. Quickly I remembered the pictures I had imagined while I was reading that book . I drew a very beatifule painting ,and got A score for that drawing. Everyone was surprised by my creativity, so I told them the truth that I have read The call of wild and that book was so amazing that compeletly formed a real picture in my mind. So basically that's why reading a novel help you to be more imaginative and creative.
Given these points, reading a book is much more enjoyable and fun, because it give the reader more detaile to read and drag you deep in the story. In addition, it helps your ability to produce new images from your own thoughts. So everyone should read more books instead of watching more movies.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210416666667 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.170833333333 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0791666666667 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0395833333333 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10625 0.0685040099705 155% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104166666667 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.04375 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.27722883695 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0270833333333 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110416666667 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01875 0.0209618222197 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00625 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2344.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30316742081 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.22850678733 0.338922669872 67% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.180995475113 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.113122171946 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0588235294118 0.112833075102 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27722883695 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484162895928 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.1430103195 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0909090909 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8928081697 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.1904566022 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.13157894737 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317213045817 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122333274853 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0949158291542 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482665453166 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141755284035 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127526002559 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711866237019 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372940874678 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964979928629 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250157766298 0.210909579961 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538414345732 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.