Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position
Storytelling is an artful skill. It can use a variation of the medium, either with novels, comic books or movies, to convey the story message. Through the advancement of technologies such as CGI, a movie can tell the story in the most surreal way. It is breathtaking to witness the story come to life. The story is the soul of the the novel. Although going to a cinema is very enjoyable, I personally agree with the statement because several reasons I would like to elaborate in the next paragraph.
First, the novel contains a comprehensive story and description without time restriction. Unlike a movie where it has time and money constraint, a book constitutes many chapters with full of details and characters. It is impossible to make a movie with duration of 6 hours and involve 120 different characters. For example, Harry Potter book consists three hundred to five hundred pages, if the movie similar to the novel, we will sit back for almost six hours. As a consequence, the cinema will have less profit and cinemagoer feel bored and restive. I was watched the movie and I felt the movie is terrible.
Second, the adaptation of certain scene may be insurmountable to recreate. Although the green screen can produce the implausible scene, sometimes, they unable to resemble the writer imagination or the result look forced so the spectator feel unsatisfied. For instance, one of the obstacles with the Twilight movie is the face changing sequence, facilitated by the CGI, looks so unnatural and delayed. It feels fake and inadequate, different from our imagination. The scene is portray the transformation of the baby, who is a vampire, into the adult form. I was startled with the result.
Ultimately, watching movies to the cinema or even subscribing a cable service require extra cash. Considering the matter, I realized that it will benefit the entertainment industry but I personally feel that is too costly and take some of my enjoyment since I will think about the consequences afterward. The subscription of cable need to be renew every month, which is very troublesome for me. In the other hand, the novel is cheaper and everlasting. I can reread it many times in the comfort of my home, where is very convenient. I believe that the nuance of the place affect the storyline.
Reading has more attractive qualities than the movie adaptation, that is explain in the previous paragraph. Although a movie complements the story very well, I personally believe that reading a book is more enjoyable than just watch the movie adaptation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... come to life. The story is the soul of the the novel. Although going to a cinema is ve...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... come to life. The story is the soul of the the novel. Although going to a cinema is ve...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'portrayed'.
Suggestion: portrayed
...rent from our imagination. The scene is portray the transformation of the baby, who is ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...ties than the movie adaptation, that is explain in the previous paragraph. Although a m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97202797203 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93436439467 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5202566753 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0384615385 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03846153846 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174857280972 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452314944354 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507500376317 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101101273622 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074654067775 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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