Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people are tinder and naive in their life and more liable to commit the mistake. From immemorial time, society has made them followed a general rule to guide for their favor. In personal opinion, the younger generation of concurrent time has faced a very fragile rules as compared to the older generation had been through in the past. In following paragraph, I illustate about the position that I take vividly.
First of all, in modern age, a social norms are changing in the favor of the children pshycology. Parents are open to discuss with their children about their problem, alleviate their fear, warn them for the potent risk and liable to respect their children decision. In contrast, a older generation bound massively with the social norms; they had to follow the normal path what society created. For instance, in older times in my country, a educatated people had not allowed to change their career, expect a few reputative jobs like doctor, engineer, goverment officer, etc. A career other than that was highly discourage and in the severe case, they had to leave their home to follow the dream prospects they have chosen. In most of the case, a young people at that time had to take the prescribed career no matter how good they was in other field. However, today's generation may not perserve the a similar consequences and parents are free to change their mind if pursuaded in right way.
Again, a young people already have been familiar with the different issue and their right, they are hard to control in these day. On the other hand, older generation are naive and obliterant to their right. In the past, they followed the rule of the society without the questioning the basis behind it. A simple example is the concept of the marriage in the previous era. At that time, to have a child, they must married first. Despite their interest to be married, they need to marry to continue their generation. However, people in this generation got their child born even in their younger age without being afraid of the society.
In conclusion, I feel that society expect younger people to follow all the rules loosely in this generation because of society directed towards their mentality and their mentality to offset the rule created by the society.
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...heir right, they are hard to control in these day. On the other hand, older generation ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84832904884 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41569478906 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514138817481 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2464737337 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2631578947 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149039211095 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549551084546 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495558446256 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119612255601 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335997377749 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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