Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the skyrocketing development of technology, the past decades have witnessed huge progress of the society. While this brings about increasing living standards, some may argue that it also gives birth to some rules, which are too strict for young people to follow. However, I don't agree with this opinion. From my perspective, it is beneficial for young people to follow these rules, since they help the youth to develop good behaviors and also protect them from potential dangers.
To begin with, the current rules that the society expect the young guys to follow help keep young people's behavior on the right track. It is very common that many youngsters do not have a clear understanding of the society and its mechanism, since most of them are in school and do not need to raise themselves independently. Thus, the possiblity of their misbehaviors can be at an extremely high level. For example, they may feel it is not necessary for them to study at school and thus just quit it. Nonetheless, education is very important, and the rules can make sure that most of the young children can be well educated before their adulthood.
Secondly, the rules can avoid unnecesary harm for the youth. Imagine a setting that a young man does not need to follow any rules or regulations of the society. Then he may just feel free to do anything he wants, including something really detrimental, such as robbery, taking drugs and fighting with others etc. Such things are harmful not only to the society, but also to himself. The reason lies in that he will just become a criminal and can not enjoy many well-beings of a normal citizen. If the rules just stopped him from the very beginning, then he could still have a very promising future.
However, some of the rules impose unnecessary restrain on the young generation. There does exist some regulations in the current education system. For instance, students have to follow a certain answering patterns in order to gain the points in exams and be admitted to the ideal academy, thus curbing their creativity and imagination in some way.
In a nutshell, the rules that current society expects the young people to follow are not too strict, as they can keep the youth on the right track and help to protect them from unnecessary dangers and harms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82575757576 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58493487882 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8800895856 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.578947368 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239071882767 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723563255717 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743923468737 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144640708649 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530906276975 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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