Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people believe that the present rules of society are necessary because they help the youth to prosper in their life. However, I do not agree with this stance and I think that present rules are too strict for the young generation for the following three reasons.

First of all, in the present societies children are forced to study whenever they find any time which is making them demotivated. For example, in China, young people are forced to study a lot of time so that they can do well in their professional life. Moreover, these children are burdened with more books to study in a year comparing to a USA student and this is giving them a lot of stress which has a negative impact on their development. In the past, the children were not that much forced to study and they enjoyed a less competitive environment. By forcing the youth to study a lot, the present societies have become more strict to the young ones.

Second of all, in the present society, there is not enough time to play, which is hampering the mental growth of the young generations. For example, young people now have to do a lot of chores in their home as their parents are busy with their job. By this process, there is less time to play and without enough playing it is not possible to have the necessary mental growth of the young people. However, in the old-time, parents were always present to do any necessary chores in their home, so children received a lot of time to play and had necessary mental development. As children are forced to do the necessary work of their as their parents can not do due to their job, it is forcing the children to have limited development than the past.

Finally, in the present society, the government rules are too strict for the young people that they can not enjoy their life that much which damaging the entertainment time of their youth. For example, in my country the young are not allowed to do any fun stuff like picnic, playing games without direct supervision of the old people. So, the young people can not enjoy their time however they want due to government rules. On the other hand, my grandparents when they were young, did picnics, playing games whenever they want without any government interference. Thus, due to this strict government rule, the young people can not enjoy their free time however they want.

For these above three reasons, I believe that the present societies are too strict to the young people which is damaging their growth, their entertainment time and demotivating them as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'picnic'
Suggestion: picnic
... grandparents when they were young, did picnics, playing games whenever they want witho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, i think, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68526785714 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43943600346 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366071428571 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1718157759 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.611111111 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152568341503 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677550197006 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571399017199 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12045390606 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649067974728 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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