Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, rules and regulations have played a pivotal role in all societies. Rules indicate that how much a society is successful. This matter that whether rules are very strict for youth or not is a controversial issue between people. A majority of people think that young people were more free in the past, and it is hard for young people to adhere the today's strict rules. I disagree with this idea for two main reasons. I will explain my viewpoint in the following essay.
The first noteworthy regarding this issue is that in such a sophisticated world where we are living, some regulation had better exist. Today, as can be felt easily, the style of living has evolved. There are many cutting-edge devices that come to our aid. If there are not some rules, they will destroy their life. For example, there are many high-speed cars and young people tend to try these cars. If there is not any rule to control these high-speed cars, young people may lose their life. Therefore, these rules are very practical in today world.
More importantly, it is axiomatic that today, young people are very clever. It is easy for them to follow these regulations. For instance, my brother can understand and obey the rules more than me. When I was young, I was very rebellious and I thought every person should obey me. I was not familiar with the consequences of crimes and it was very hard for me to follow the rules. With the development of technology and the Internet, these rules are not very strict for young people. They can accept these regulations logically.
All in all, by considering the mentioned reasons above, I think today rules are not very strict for young people. It is owing to the fact that these rules are very practical especially in today advanced world, and youth are very rational.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73734177215 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51501459832 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503164556962 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5664731535 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0454545455 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224095642288 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699917856758 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464380821845 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149049900318 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049288968724 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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