Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people can play an imporatant role in societies. Some groups of people believe that young adults are in a high presure to follow strict rules and traditionals. Others might take the opposite point. From my vantage point, I firmly believe that teenagers and young adults are not pursuing any rules nowadays. I will elaborate on my reasons in the following pragraphs.
Nowadays, young people do not follow any rule and they live by their own conditions. They do not liston to anybody or their parents and follow their preferable manners. On the other hands, parents are adjusting themselves with their children. When my father lived, they had to liston their parents even they mislead them and made them a lot of problems. Nowadays, parents spend their most energy and time, nursing their children and satisfaying their children's desires. In this trend I cannot imagine that young adults are in the strict pressure for obeying rules.
Young people more and more are contributing their time and energy to demonstrations againts current rules. They are spereading their ideas in the universities and argue government's decision all the time. They consider these kinds of activities a progress in their mentalities and ask everybody around them to join their contests. When I was younger, my country was managed with dictatorship rules and nobody could share his ideas in the public. In contrast, students and young peopl could talk about their opinion in the universities secretly. The gowernment did not allow people to hold any demonstration in the streets and suppress any activities that were related to the governments decision. Compare to current days, young people have opsolute freedom to talk and do not obey the current rules.
Moreover, many rules that were considered inappropriated to break in traditional society, can be broken and unfollow by young people. These people are considered as open-minded people who can not stand any rule,which are against their beliefs. Many young people are supporting gay's right today and defend any suppliment rules that the government states. When I was younger having relation with your own sex was depracated among convetional rules and old people. However, today, people get married with their friends and the government support them ligally.
In conclusion, in my opinion, young people have more freedom and choices to indicate their beliefs. Not only current rules are not strict, but also they give young people more freedom tho choose their life style and manners in society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...They consider these kinds of activities a progress in their mentalities and ask everybody ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...minded people who can not stand any rule,which are against their beliefs. Many young p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18780487805 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61579993122 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514634146341 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0530317527 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.08 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220252392256 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07588447048 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059449412015 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139159021699 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426437329093 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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