Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology advancement has been regarded as one of the great achievement made by human beings. We, as a human are more attracted towards the technology that has been introduced to this world. I mostly disagree with the prompt that smartphones have caused harm to our society. This is mainly because of the three main reasons which I will elaborate below.
First of all, everything out there is for some reason and I personally feels that evolvement of smartphones has opened a lot of spaces to be fulfilled in this contemporary world. My personal experience is the best example for this. When I was emerging as a young man during the mid 2000's , I have to face a lot of difficulties for having a good conversation with my father who used to stay abroad. At that stage, I thought of owning a smartphone which used to be a lot more difficult task to achieve as there were very few of the distributers out there who are selling the phones. So, certainly it is very endeavor for someone like me for owning smartphones now.
Secondly, the technology has certainly risen to the height that it is very difficult for anyone to leave a second without smartphones. For example, if somebody who is running a company of delivering food and other items then it is very likely for that person to have smartphones with him every time as many of his customers would be waiting for him to come and deliver whatever they've ordered with him. And if the owner of the company fails to carry phone with him then it will be too much difficult for his customer to deal with him.
Finally, the use of smartphones have taken a step forward for the technology to fulfills the dreams of many people out there. Social media influencer can be taken into consideration for the best example of it. They are the one who are always busy interacting with their fans and their devotee. And with the use of smartphones they can easily do so as they can click instant pictures and videos to share with their followers which will help them to be in regular touch with their fans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...ere is for some reason and I personally feels that evolvement of smartphones has open...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ging as a young man during the mid 2000s , I have to face a lot of difficulties fo...
^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...ng for him to come and deliver whatever theyve ordered with him. And if the owner of t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56675749319 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6092786939 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1711824687 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192659131077 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680439835448 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729779285716 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119725010323 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372829511256 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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